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Warning:  Employers Screen Facebook Profiles!

Read this article!  Employers are now often looking through Facebook profiles and screening potential employees based on what they find there.  We might be used to thinking of those spaces as our own, but unless they’re set to private, employers can find them.  And, no matter what, the profile picture is always public!

[So, here, we have a bit more commentary.  Although the commentary is still a little short.  More importantly, though, it doesn't address the ethical component of the article!  The commentary is concerned just with practical issues and consequences, and not with moral issues and concerns.]